Show more ocean there's too much white space at the top move the 2013 and the city upward so all the white space is at the bottom for people to put the info. Most important minimize the white space at the top. i like the landscape and shading and the iced water is a nice touch. unless you are trying to put emphases on the 3 I would decrease the kerning between 1 and 3 probably between 10-50 maybe 60. make some distance between the highest sky scraper and 2013 but have it be upward and DON'T press it to the left thats asking for trouble and will conflict with the principles of design
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